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Indifference, iron crossed as my course of action A long way into the blue. Vanish Maybe for a century or love heart lost, a millennia Hurtful in echoes, reminiscent romances, a dog plays with a fox Almost a reproduction of age old attrocity, dead as dust is dust Performing for an eternity, dancing the copious blood red lies Protective of nothing, a mix of self-assessment and experimentation You can leave now. _ Daffy, finally...here's an acrostic! :D

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 7/18/2009 4:49:00 PM
Thought provoking poem. Nice use of the acrostic form. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 7/17/2009 3:52:00 PM
btw... would you mind if I sent you a poem that I don't know if I should post yet?
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Date: 7/17/2009 10:07:00 AM
YAAAAY!!!! I love this "dead as dust is dust" and of course the two ending lines which are quite simply exquisite. KCOG love the idea of the ironic acrostic! =] Love, Daffy
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