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Indifference, iron crossed as my course of action

A long way into the blue. Vanish
Maybe for a century or love heart lost, a millennia

Hurtful in echoes, reminiscent romances, a dog plays with a fox
Almost a reproduction of age old attrocity, dead as dust is dust
Performing for an eternity, dancing the copious blood red lies
Protective of nothing, a mix of self-assessment and experimentation
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Daffy, finally...here's an acrostic! :D
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July 18, 2009 at 4:49 PM
Thought provoking poem. Nice use of the acrostic form. Keep on writing! Karen
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July 17, 2009 at 3:52 PM
btw... would you mind if I sent you a poem that I don't know if I should post yet?
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July 17, 2009 at 10:07 AM
YAAAAY!!!! I love this "dead as dust is dust" and of course the two ending lines which are quite simply exquisite. KCOG love the idea of the ironic acrostic! =] Love, Daffy
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