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Least Spend Treasured Seconds

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As the candle slowly burns until the faintest light flickers to the end, so does the human soul cease to exist. 6/30/2017

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Date: 7/4/2017 12:06:00 AM

I love this,Eve.(soupmail)

Date: 7/2/2017 2:33:00 AM

Excellent comparison of human life. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it.

Date: 7/1/2017 2:46:00 PM

- Lovely written, Eve :) - Best wishes for a great weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Date: 7/1/2017 7:01:00 AM

A beautiful comparison of human life, Eve:)

Date: 7/1/2017 4:44:00 AM

What a nice portrait of the human life, well done Eve

Date: 6/30/2017 9:50:00 PM

I've burned mine at both ends. That's not good is it? Hopefully we be judged by the love in our hearts, Mrs Eve.

Date: 6/30/2017 8:20:00 PM

Love this Monoku as it paints a very real picture of life and it's cycle with so few words <3

Date: 6/30/2017 12:17:00 PM

This was really nice and thought provoking Eve. It is when we burn that candle at both ends that the result happens much quicker.

Date: 6/30/2017 11:37:00 AM

a beautiful monoku Eve:-) hugs jan xx