Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Learn To Fly C Y S

Shy she hid in
trees each day
The leaves kept her
out of sight
But then when the 
sun went down
She rode the stars 
to shine bright

Date:9/1/2019
Sponsored by: nette onclaud
Contest:FOUR LINES OF MELODIC POETRY

2nd place

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Quoth Theraven March 7, 2020 at 8:57 PM Brenda, Lovely tree among the stars. -Richard

John Fleming September 8, 2019 at 12:57 AM I agree with CayCay...most delightful imagery. Very well done, Poetess! In affection. :) john Brenda Chiri September 8, 2019 at 1:28 AM Ahh thank you John! I got 2nd place with this one!;) always my biggest fan! ;) All my affection!

Chris Green September 5, 2019 at 4:41 PM Well hell, I don't even know how I missed this one, this was fantastic. Yours deserved to win this contest. Congrats Brenda. Beautiful and yours fit the title you chose perfectly Brenda Chiri September 5, 2019 at 4:53 PM Lol Chris yours was amazing and I knew I stood no chance next to yours! Thank you I do appreciate your warm words!;)

CayCay Godwin September 2, 2019 at 11:50 AM I don't know how this placed or even if the contest is closed but I know I love the imagery and the feel it gives. Poetry hugs ... CayCay Brenda Chiri September 2, 2019 at 1:10 PM Cat Cay thank you I appreciate your read and comment!;)

Caren Krutsinger September 1, 2019 at 10:16 PM This has such a terrific upbeat ending! Wow! Love it! Brenda Chiri September 2, 2019 at 11:20 AM Thank you Caren you are far too kind!;)