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Learn To Fly C Y S

Shy she hid in trees each day The leaves kept her out of sight But then when the sun went down She rode the stars to shine bright Date:9/1/2019 Sponsored by: nette onclaud Contest:FOUR LINES OF MELODIC POETRY 2nd place

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/7/2020 8:57:00 PM

Brenda, Lovely tree among the stars. -Richard

John Fleming

Date: 9/8/2019 12:57:00 AM

I agree with CayCay...most delightful imagery. Very well done, Poetess! In affection. :) john

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/8/2019 1:28:00 AM

Ahh thank you John! I got 2nd place with this one!;) always my biggest fan! ;) All my affection!

Chris Green

Date: 9/5/2019 4:41:00 PM

Well hell, I don't even know how I missed this one, this was fantastic. Yours deserved to win this contest. Congrats Brenda. Beautiful and yours fit the title you chose perfectly

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/5/2019 4:53:00 PM

Lol Chris yours was amazing and I knew I stood no chance next to yours! Thank you I do appreciate your warm words!;)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/2/2019 11:50:00 AM

I don't know how this placed or even if the contest is closed but I know I love the imagery and the feel it gives. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/2/2019 1:10:00 PM

Cat Cay thank you I appreciate your read and comment!;)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/1/2019 10:16:00 PM

This has such a terrific upbeat ending! Wow! Love it!

Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/2/2019 11:20:00 AM

Thank you Caren you are far too kind!;)