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Ch’i- Yen-Shih
It’s a Chinese form with four lines of seven ( 7 ) syllables each. Only lines 2 and 4 rhyme.
Please note:  each line has a break after the 4th syllable for musicality’s sake. Only words with one syllable must be used.

a gold leaf moon - gilds the night and dwarfs the stars - in the sky in the pale glow - of her face scores of bat pups - learn to fly (Ch’i- Yen-Shih) 09,02,2019 FOUR LINES OF MELODIC POETRY Poetry Contest Sponsored by: nette onclaud

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Date: 9/5/2019 4:41:00 PM
An amazing write and well deserving the win! Congrats!;)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/5/2019 4:53:00 PM
Thanks Brenda,I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/3/2019 12:14:00 AM
I've been struggling to create a piece for this contest, but you nailed it! I really like what you did with this challenge :)
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Date: 9/3/2019 7:30:00 AM
Thanks Hello, I appreciate your comments of support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/2/2019 11:10:00 PM
That is a FANTASTIC read-worthy piece, for a righteous honor! ~ Aloha always William
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Date: 9/3/2019 7:29:00 AM
Thanks William, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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