Leaf Massaged By a Caterpillar

Tiny legs working.
Wonderful massage technique.
Pleasure undescribed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 28, 2010 at 1:17 PM
Very cool and cute Marty.. good luck in the contest.. my entry is The Green Mile parallel to the movie seeing the caterpillar as a prisoner until it turns into a butterfly.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
Brown Avatar
April 28, 2010 at 4:02 AM
Wishing you the best in the contest Marty. Love,Carol
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April 27, 2010 at 9:28 PM
Marty this very unique, it made me smile- my King poem is in the wrong form Grrrr- I am still thinking of another one to write in the correct form
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April 27, 2010 at 8:54 AM
very nice if for contest good luck have a great day falsehia
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