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Leaf in the Wind

Leaf of brilliant hue Beauty riding gusts of air Landing who knows where

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/12/2013 3:03:00 PM
well glad I came to see t his one after just doing one that has a leaf in it as well! Nice one, Ray.
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Date: 10/24/2010 8:18:00 AM
This made me smile as I read this Ray ^_^-- enjoyed where you brought this haiku and it speaks the truth too :) love the images in your haiku and thanks so much for your inspiring comments-- btw sorry for confusing you-- my name is really nikko :) I was just using "kikko" for October, sort of like for Halloween--just me being silly I guess :) enjoy your day :) --nikko :)
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Date: 8/30/2010 10:31:00 AM
Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Ray. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2010 10:13:00 PM
Great haiku complimented by a touch of rhyme, Ray. Good luck in Rick's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 8/29/2010 8:52:00 PM
Brilliant entry for Rick's contest Ray.. All the best to you
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Date: 8/29/2010 8:20:00 PM
lovely one, good luck in the contest
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Date: 8/29/2010 8:10:00 PM
A very nice haiku on the fall, Ray
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Date: 8/29/2010 7:58:00 PM
hmm, love the ending cause of it's truth lol, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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