Leaf In the Wind

Leaf of brilliant hue Beauty riding gusts of air Landing who knows where
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 3:03 PM
well glad I came to see t his one after just doing one that has a leaf in it as well! Nice one, Ray.
K. Avatar
October 24, 2010 at 8:18 AM
This made me smile as I read this Ray ^_^-- enjoyed where you brought this haiku and it speaks the truth too :) love the images in your haiku and thanks so much for your inspiring comments-- btw sorry for confusing you-- my name is really nikko :) I was just using "kikko" for October, sort of like for Halloween--just me being silly I guess :) enjoy your day :) --nikko :)
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2010 at 10:31 AM
Wow I missed reading a lot of excellent poetry this past weekend. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration Ray. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 10:13 PM
Great haiku complimented by a touch of rhyme, Ray. Good luck in Rick's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
Neels Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 8:52 PM
Brilliant entry for Rick's contest Ray.. All the best to you
Roberts Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 8:20 PM
lovely one, good luck in the contest
Mehta Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 8:10 PM
A very nice haiku on the fall, Ray
A   Avatar
August 29, 2010 at 7:58 PM
hmm, love the ending cause of it's truth lol, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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