Leaf

Lines. Vascular, photosynthetic ravines, Cut deeply into the skin; They morph from scar into the heart's sustenance.

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Ink Empress

Date: 5/8/2025 5:02:00 AM

Dear Seth, The last line stood out for me! Very creative take on the prompt! Love the flow! Thank you for sharing! Congratulations on your win! Sending you light

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2025 1:35:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great micro poem: Leaf :) - hugs

Beata Agustin

Date: 5/2/2025 5:41:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.