Chiquitachiamaka Baity Poet Lyric

Lead and I Will Follow

Lead and I will follow you, across the deepest seas
Sail on tranquil waters, on our quest for joy and peace

If you lead me I will follow you, onto the sands of the shores
Make love by the rippling waves
As I present to you, the gift that is rightfully yours

Lead and I will follow you, upon  majestic mountain peaks
Stretch forth my hands to capture stars,  respectfully place them at your feet

If you lead me I will follow you, deep into valleys low
Lie under peaceful skies, and watch the moon’s magnificent glow

Lead and I will follow you, across whimsical rolling plains
Stand with you under the heavens, as it pours down its fragment rains

If you lead me I will follow you, soaring the soothing skies
Fly in a world that is  free of fear and doubts, for our eternal lives

Lead and I will follow you, discovering unknown lands
Journey the earth as man and wife; I will happily give you my hand.

If you lead me I will follow you, my predestined soul mate
Walk with you on streets of gold, as we enter heaven's pearly gates


Chiquita Baity

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Terrell Martin August 28, 2011 at 10:00 AM Chiquita, if I can't follow you at least I can follow your beautifully enticing poetry that always leaves me coming back for more. Thanks for this one along with your kind comments regarding "The WORD." It's a warm feeling knowing someone with your talent is as interested in my work as I am in yours. (Sincerely:) Terry Martin

M. Hussain Effendi August 19, 2011 at 8:29 AM the more i read of u, the more impressed i am

Wole Francis August 16, 2011 at 1:47 PM beautiful........

Saurabh Gupta August 16, 2011 at 12:02 PM great contrast with nature....nice write......

Poet Destroyer A August 14, 2011 at 6:07 AM very pretty... C.B., a wonderful purpose to follow, fate holds the perfect destiny for us.. i believe we should all follow smooth sails... enjoyed your poem,..p.d.

Nette Onclaud August 13, 2011 at 6:03 PM when the girl is ready, the soul mate comes... a beautifully written piece, chiquita; ahh, the sigh of love awaits! :) huggs, nette

Gary Fields August 13, 2011 at 3:54 PM Love the rhyme! Where do I stand in line to be followed by you! Very well constructed, the poem, I mean....so romantic! Keep the write-up! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS Kiss, Kiss, Kiss-up> a model to live by, live with inspiration...... Poet Destroyer A August 14, 2011 at 6:09 AM he he he ,..i love this comment... how cute...

Andrea Dietrich August 13, 2011 at 12:18 PM Chiquita, have you found him yet. This looks like the way I would have written a poem when I used to be young and filled with romantic hope. Very nice Poet Destroyer A August 14, 2011 at 6:10 AM i was imaging a God...please tell me if i am wrong.. it was a very high spirt search.. so i imagined GOD.. but Andrea can be right..lol.. how about a manly GOD.. hahha

Don Johnson August 13, 2011 at 7:53 AM Searching for the other's laugh, the soulmate like the mirror half, to find it sorely is to chaff, but we will keep a searching:( great flow here, Don

Russell Sivey August 12, 2011 at 10:39 PM You nailed it! You created a perfect poem if there is such a thing! If there isn't then you made it as close to perfect as possible!! Great job!! Wish I had thought of it!

Jslambert Mister Roboto August 12, 2011 at 8:34 PM not my cuppatea, but that doesn't mean it lacks goodness. I always like reading your stuff...no matter the subject. You are diverse.4certain.

Judy Ball August 12, 2011 at 8:13 PM A beautiful write my friend. Filled with love and a hope for that love to be eternal. Good Job. God Bless, JB

Ingibo Benson August 12, 2011 at 6:18 PM A lovely write indeed, Chiamaka! And thanks for reading my poem and also commenting!

Steven Cooke August 12, 2011 at 5:42 PM Having read your work before, This is an exceptional Write. It is romantic poetry at its best and I should enter one of the competitions with this, if I were you. I know what I like and this is beyond good, i shall add it to one of my fav poems. well done.

Mydavolu Venkatasesha Sathyanarayana August 12, 2011 at 5:29 PM vivid and lovely imagery..truly lyrical. I wish somebody sings this for me.