Lea of Grains

In the fields of gold,
A wheaten radiance gleams;
Dancing with the wind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Martin Avatar
May 5, 2009 at 12:55 PM
You have a way with titles and context, you are by far a master of haiku. Tyler
Shango Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 7:28 PM
Another gem, annother good write.
Winter Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 11:30 AM
Oh, breathtaking as I see it and feel the wind. So gorgeous, wish I could be there right now. Trying to come back here slowly but surely. How did you know it was my entry? Anyway, happy to read you once again. Love, Shar
Strand Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 12:19 AM
Very colourful visual Raul.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Chircop Avatar
May 2, 2009 at 2:58 PM
i love this haiku and its going to my favs. it send me in a good mood,fields of golden wheat dancing in the wind-wonderful-master of haiku4x
Haniff Avatar
May 2, 2009 at 1:53 PM
such a wonderful picture u painted here! a perfect haiku indeed!....niceley done as always...love n smiles Maryam*
Mckenzie Avatar
May 2, 2009 at 11:24 AM
Ah a wonderful picture you painted great Haiku! Laura :)
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