Le Minuit Avec Vous



       ***Le Minuit Avec Vous***
           The Midnight With You


To have a sensual repast with thee,
Upon a midnight, beneath our beloved
Oakwood tree!
Whenst the world, not a sound doth make.
Just lovers lips heard, smacking of
heavenly, baked earthen cakes.

Goblets, golden with jewels that doth
laugh and twinkle
This midnight repast we, sipping wine
so deliciously, swirl with our tongues.
Finding our bodies tingle.
We, the Romeo and Juliet of our day,
Unashamed to celebrate our lives in our
own private, hot foray.

Only celestial guests join us, the heavenly 
moon and we...verily faint at the beauty of 
our guests, the constellations.
Kissing unabashedly, in front of these guests.
Which human would have any reservations?

This very silent, intimate space on God's 
firmament actually took place.
At midnight be, 'twas the blessed you and me, 
Under the eyes of God and His most loving face!


               July 10, 2020
                6:30pm PST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 7/23/2020 1:08:00 PM
Stunning. Never doubt for once you are a poet. You certainly have the gift. Keep writing, ignore the petty politics. This is so beautiful. Truly. L x
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/23/2020 2:22:00 PM
Lady.....like you, I love this one....politics abounds withinn here. Too bad. Would love to see more love, less attitude. Deepest thanks for your remarks. Very kind. Love, Panagiota xxx
Date: 7/12/2020 4:09:00 AM
Fantastique!...one of your best Pangie...love & hugs dear friend,,,^WW^ :o)
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/12/2020 10:43:00 AM
Oui! I do agree with you. Wish every poem I wrote were this good. Merci, Pangie
Date: 7/11/2020 2:28:00 PM
wow, what a sensuous "in the face of nature" splendid poem, Panagiota. Love this.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/11/2020 2:55:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! This poem is very dear to me, so a comment to this one is soothingly beautiful! Panagiota xx
Date: 7/11/2020 11:34:00 AM
Tres bien!! Very very nice!! Uninhibited open honest Romance under God’s sky!!
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/11/2020 12:19:00 PM
Bon journee! Great to hear from you, again! Merci,Krish! Panagiota
Date: 7/11/2020 9:56:00 AM
Hello Panagiota,well done. I find this to be a romantic and passionate poem. Enjoyed to read. Enjoy your day my friend. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/12/2020 2:50:00 PM
Hello Panagiota, yes it is passionate. Who does this at midnight? people that are awake. Bless you. Hugs Darlene xxxx-oooo.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/11/2020 12:10:00 PM
Hello Darlene~ it is passionate, especially,,who does this at midnight? Takes a sense of adventure... Bless you this day. Hugs.. Panagiota.xxxooo Appreciate you time in commenting!
Date: 7/11/2020 7:05:00 AM
Your romantic quill is aflame again Panagiota. You write these so well. Tom
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/11/2020 9:44:00 AM
Godd morning, Tom. I appreciate your comment,dear Poet and good friend. Panagiota
Date: 7/11/2020 5:21:00 AM
My friend, such a romantic and stirring piece. If only true lovers could leave the world behind and live in the heavens. How magnificently great would that be? They can but only in poetry. Love this gem. A fav...
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 7/11/2020 1:09:00 PM
OMG...I replied first to you and it did not work. So sorry. Makes no sense at all. I hope it takes this time. True love never ends...it keeps my pen moving. I promise you, Robert, it exists as bright as the brightest moon. And larger than all oceans. You know mine exists in the Romios Star. I feel that love in my veins pulsating every second. Thank you for FAVINg this....dear friend......Panagiota. Xx
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