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Lazy Susan Blues

Round and round, went the memories of pain As the joy slid off, in an unending refrain Round and round, the promises spun And one by one, into lies they’ve become Round and round my heart was passed by Your eyes looking distant, mine alone left to cry Round and round, my life came and went In blind revolution, —more borrowed than lent (Villanova Pennsylvania: October, 2016)

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Date: 10/11/2016 2:04:00 PM
What a great, succinct write loaded with emotional impact. One of my favorite types of poetry because it isn't easy to deliver heavy poetic jabs in short lines. I think I've complimented your mastery of brevity before, but then my memory is often splotchy. I loved it, still do ... CayCay
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Date: 10/11/2016 1:01:00 PM
I also enjoyed this poem.it is a deep powerful thought. Well written. I enjoyed this poem.
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Date: 10/11/2016 12:51:00 PM
Really nicely done. Such a deep and powerful thought to this poem. The rhyme I excellent and the meter smooth. I really enjoyed this.
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