Kash Poet Poet Haiku

Lazy Noon

lazy noon---
                                                  the coos of a dove
                                                   are nicely spaced









 

                                                        
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                                                Placement:2nd ;(Nov. 2012)

                                                Contest:Another Poem

                                                Sponsor:Susan Burch

                                                 By:kash poet

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Andrea Dietrich November 16, 2012 at 8:09 AM more soupmail.

Kim Merryman November 15, 2012 at 2:09 PM I like your haiku, Kash! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Tanya Harrington November 15, 2012 at 12:33 PM Congrats Kash, --waiting for the coos of noon to softly woo me. Love this haiku. :) Tanya

Carol Sunshine Brown November 15, 2012 at 6:39 AM Congratulations on your win in this contest Kash. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 14, 2012 at 3:37 PM CONGRATS KASH ON A SWEET WRITE AND WIN LUV .. COOS OF A DOVE SPACED NICELY AS LOVERS BREATHE ..WPW

Poet Destroyer A November 14, 2012 at 1:13 PM Kash, congratulations in Susan's "Another fun poem" contest... have a nice day... :-) Linda...

Debbie Guzzi November 14, 2012 at 11:23 AM Dreamy always so dreamy..do a WAKE UP or woken up one for me okies. I do like this it's just you always seem to be dreaming? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Joseph May November 14, 2012 at 9:05 AM congrats on your win Kash

Michael J. Falotico November 12, 2012 at 8:42 AM Bravo my friend... a true poet on all levels.... Michael

Kathryn Collins November 11, 2012 at 7:40 AM The detail you turn into poetry is beautiful.

Richard Lamoureux November 9, 2012 at 11:25 AM I feel like I am sitting by the sea. Thanks for the momentary escape.

Carol Sunshine Brown November 9, 2012 at 8:24 AM I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Kash as usual. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2012 at 12:53 AM oh my gosh I just looked down and saw the person below me also said awwww Kash, if you go see my blog, you will see something neat I found out about our poems here.

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2012 at 12:52 AM awww, this is sweet, Kashinath!!! On your other haiku, you got robbed my friend. That magnificent one should have been on the winners list!!

Laura Breidenthal November 8, 2012 at 8:56 PM aww this is awesome. I love doves and their comforting coos. Nicely written. Always, laura

Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2012 at 1:38 PM Sounds lovely, Kash .... you are the best!! - Have a lazy afternoon. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2012 at 1:39 PM Haiku xxxx (?) - :) :)

Russell Sivey November 8, 2012 at 1:24 PM This is a wonderful and truly desirable write! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly delightful and lovely poem this afternoon! What a fantastic and wondrous piece, Great Work!!

Nette Onclaud November 8, 2012 at 12:46 PM another pow wow of a 'ku, kashi... bring it on; more, more.. buy a new cellphone, darn!..lol..:) huggs!