Lazy Noon

lazy noon---
                                                  the coos of a dove
                                                   are nicely spaced









 

                                                        
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                                                Placement:2nd ;(Nov. 2012)

                                                Contest:Another Poem

                                                Sponsor:Susan Burch

                                                 By:kash poet

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/16/2012 8:09:00 AM

more soupmail.

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/15/2012 2:09:00 PM

I like your haiku, Kash! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Tanya Harrington

Date: 11/15/2012 12:33:00 PM

Congrats Kash, --waiting for the coos of noon to softly woo me. Love this haiku. :) Tanya

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/15/2012 6:39:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in this contest Kash. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/14/2012 3:37:00 PM

CONGRATS KASH ON A SWEET WRITE AND WIN LUV .. COOS OF A DOVE SPACED NICELY AS LOVERS BREATHE ..WPW

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/14/2012 1:13:00 PM

Kash, congratulations in Susan's "Another fun poem" contest... have a nice day... :-) Linda...

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/14/2012 11:23:00 AM

Dreamy always so dreamy..do a WAKE UP or woken up one for me okies. I do like this it's just you always seem to be dreaming? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Joseph May

Date: 11/14/2012 9:05:00 AM

congrats on your win Kash

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/12/2012 8:42:00 AM

Bravo my friend... a true poet on all levels.... Michael

Kathryn Collins

Date: 11/11/2012 7:40:00 AM

The detail you turn into poetry is beautiful.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/9/2012 11:25:00 AM

I feel like I am sitting by the sea. Thanks for the momentary escape.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/9/2012 8:24:00 AM

I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Kash as usual. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2012 12:53:00 AM

oh my gosh I just looked down and saw the person below me also said awwww Kash, if you go see my blog, you will see something neat I found out about our poems here.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2012 12:52:00 AM

awww, this is sweet, Kashinath!!! On your other haiku, you got robbed my friend. That magnificent one should have been on the winners list!!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/8/2012 8:56:00 PM

aww this is awesome. I love doves and their comforting coos. Nicely written. Always, laura

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/8/2012 1:38:00 PM

Sounds lovely, Kash .... you are the best!! - Have a lazy afternoon. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/8/2012 1:39:00 PM

Haiku xxxx (?) - :) :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/8/2012 1:24:00 PM

This is a wonderful and truly desirable write! I really enjoyed reading this incredibly delightful and lovely poem this afternoon! What a fantastic and wondrous piece, Great Work!!