Just That Archaic Poet Poet Rhyme

Lazy Man

This great escape, though I'm half awake, 
Feels so real I know it's fake!
Sweet, rich smoke, and I'm so relaxed-
(How much more can I take?) 
My evaluation, it could be wrong 
By trumpet, horn, or hit of bong; 
Lazy Man just in a daze- 
(Love me fast, or leave me long!)

*Very old "stoner" poem lol

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Scott Thirtyseven November 1, 2013 at 11:45 PM Ah apathy... Just That Archaic Poet November 2, 2013 at 8:02 AM There is a sense of apathy that I wasn't even aware of; thanks for brining that to light, Scott, and thanks for reading :)

Delysia Hendricks October 28, 2013 at 3:22 PM lol. Nice one, Tap. Fer yeers bin doin nowt but binge // livvin life undir de freenge // cer not a bhean of wot’s not seen // im hepie wen me wirl is ghreen. Just That Archaic Poet October 29, 2013 at 9:43 AM Love your creative replies, D; thanks for the read :)