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Lazy Man

This great escape, though I'm half awake, Feels so real I know it's fake! Sweet, rich smoke, and I'm so relaxed- (How much more can I take?) My evaluation, it could be wrong By trumpet, horn, or hit of bong; Lazy Man just in a daze- (Love me fast, or leave me long!) *Very old "stoner" poem lol

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 11/1/2013 11:45:00 PM
Ah apathy...
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Date: 11/2/2013 8:02:00 AM
There is a sense of apathy that I wasn't even aware of; thanks for brining that to light, Scott, and thanks for reading :)
Date: 10/28/2013 3:22:00 PM
lol. Nice one, Tap. Fer yeers bin doin nowt but binge // livvin life undir de freenge // cer not a bhean of wot’s not seen // im hepie wen me wirl is ghreen.
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Date: 10/29/2013 9:43:00 AM
Love your creative replies, D; thanks for the read :)

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