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Lazy Daisy Days

LAZY DAISY DAYS Languishing lying listlessly in the warm lamp of the sun Landscapes lingering language of lavishness again won Daisy dances decorate abundant demur flowerbeds Demonstrative distractive drapes-petite white heads Daylight daydreams decorate in delightful colored array Dispersing discord drama as I lazily capture a daisy day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/15/2013 8:08:00 AM
Awesome alliteration adds to the imagery!!
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Date: 7/14/2013 8:11:00 PM
Very nice Kim, :o)
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Date: 7/14/2013 1:02:00 PM
- Delightful, Kim!! - Love it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/14/2013 9:47:00 AM
very creative write Kim....enjoyed
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Date: 7/14/2013 9:34:00 AM
refreshing write sprinkled with alliteration... a joy to read this one aloud.. you charm, kim... her's a daisy for you... :) huggs
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