Kim Van Breda Poet Couplet

Lazy Daisy Days

LAZY DAISY DAYS

Languishing lying listlessly in the warm lamp of the sun

Landscapes lingering language of lavishness again won



Daisy dances decorate abundant demur flowerbeds

Demonstrative distractive drapes-petite white heads



Daylight daydreams decorate in delightful colored array

Dispersing discord drama as I lazily capture a daisy day

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Andrea Dietrich July 15, 2013 at 8:08 AM Awesome alliteration adds to the imagery!!

Dan Kearley July 14, 2013 at 8:11 PM Very nice Kim, :o)

Anne-Lise Andresen July 14, 2013 at 1:02 PM - Delightful, Kim!! - Love it! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May July 14, 2013 at 9:47 AM very creative write Kim....enjoyed

Nette Onclaud July 14, 2013 at 9:34 AM refreshing write sprinkled with alliteration... a joy to read this one aloud.. you charm, kim... her's a daisy for you... :) huggs