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Laziness

Sick, sedated, sloth Feel the breeze of insect wings Fatal stagnation

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 8/17/2011 10:46:00 AM
I like this one. Ben there done that. Very good.
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Date: 8/17/2011 9:45:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your creative poetry with us Brenden. I enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back another time to read more. Love, Carol
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