Home » Poems » Cecil Hickman » Laziness

Laziness

blanket of white stretched
backlash of society
laziness


Written for

Sponsor Charles Henderson 
Contest Name haiku vs. senryu

Copyright © Cecil Hickman | Year Posted 2011

historylifepeoplephilosophysocialsenryu

♡Like0

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

February 1, 2011 at 9:20 PM

You have me smiling with this one. Congratulations on your contest win. Keep on writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen

January 26, 2011 at 8:04 PM

This is a very interesting haiku. I had to read it several times; each time getting more and more from it. I like this very much. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Very well deserved. Best wishes. Deb

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 25, 2011 at 4:21 AM

Congratulations Cecil, for the win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

January 24, 2011 at 10:27 PM

VEry interesting message in this haiku. A big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea

Francine Roberts

January 24, 2011 at 5:27 PM

congrats on your win in the contest Cecil, wonderful entry

January 24, 2011 at 10:30 AM

i'm bewitched,cecil... BEST CHEERS to you for the special win..:) huggs, nette

January 24, 2011 at 9:52 AM

Way to go Cecil, on yoru worthy poem's 7th place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

January 24, 2011 at 9:20 AM

Wonderful poem, Cecil. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn

January 24, 2011 at 8:57 AM

Hi Cecil - Congratulations on your WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 24, 2011 at 6:46 AM

Congrats Cecil on your super win in the haiku vs. senryu contest.. awesome win my friend..luv..

January 23, 2011 at 4:02 PM

Great images on the theme of laziness, and good luck

January 23, 2011 at 4:00 PM

Good luck in the contest with this great work..Sara

January 23, 2011 at 11:10 AM

very impressive and well-crafted, cecil.. winning streaks to you in the contest! :) huggs, nette

Poet Destroyer A

January 23, 2011 at 11:04 AM

a good entry for the contest Cicil, like the second stanza, a backlash it does bring, good luck on the contest, enjoyed,..p.d.

Nebeolisa Okwudili

January 23, 2011 at 10:54 AM

pretty imteresting on haiku.

Get a Premium Membership

Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.

Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace