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Laziness

blanket of white stretched backlash of society laziness Written for Sponsor Charles Henderson Contest Name haiku vs. senryu

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 2/1/2011 9:20:00 PM
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You have me smiling with this one. Congratulations on your contest win. Keep on writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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Deb Radke
Date: 1/26/2011 8:04:00 PM
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This is a very interesting haiku. I had to read it several times; each time getting more and more from it. I like this very much. Congratulations on your winning placement in the contest. Very well deserved. Best wishes. Deb
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Carol Sunshine Brown
Date: 1/25/2011 4:21:00 AM
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Congratulations Cecil, for the win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/24/2011 10:27:00 PM
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VEry interesting message in this haiku. A big congratulations to you. LUv, Andrea
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Francine Roberts
Date: 1/24/2011 5:27:00 PM
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congrats on your win in the contest Cecil, wonderful entry
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 1/24/2011 10:30:00 AM
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i'm bewitched,cecil... BEST CHEERS to you for the special win..:) huggs, nette
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John Freeman
Date: 1/24/2011 9:52:00 AM
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Way to go Cecil, on yoru worthy poem's 7th place. Agape, Moses
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 1/24/2011 9:20:00 AM
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Wonderful poem, Cecil. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Kory Calhoun
Date: 1/24/2011 8:57:00 AM
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Hi Cecil - Congratulations on your WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC
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Linda-Marie Sweetheart
Date: 1/24/2011 6:46:00 AM
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Congrats Cecil on your super win in the haiku vs. senryu contest.. awesome win my friend..luv..
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Dr.Ram Mehta
Date: 1/23/2011 4:02:00 PM
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Great images on the theme of laziness, and good luck
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/23/2011 4:00:00 PM
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Good luck in the contest with this great work..Sara
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 1/23/2011 11:10:00 AM
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very impressive and well-crafted, cecil.. winning streaks to you in the contest! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/23/2011 11:04:00 AM
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a good entry for the contest Cicil, like the second stanza, a backlash it does bring, good luck on the contest, enjoyed,..p.d.
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Nebeolisa Okwudili
Date: 1/23/2011 10:54:00 AM
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pretty imteresting on haiku.
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