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Layers of the Ocean

. . I . . . . . I . . . . . G . . . P N M L U H P E S E A T A S . S L E . H S . . . R . . . . . . . ..................................A surfaced "Happily Ever After"........................................... RESENTMENT. . . DENIAL . . . REGRET . . .......................................Forgave, but wont forget............................................... PRETENDING . . . LOST HOPE . . . . LIES . . . .......................................Crying as my heart prys................................................. PAIN . . . . . HURT . . . BURNING . .......................................A lifetime of yearning........................................................ SCREAMING . . . DECIEVING . . . BLEEDING . .........................................Forever dissapearing ...................................................... . . . D r a g g e d U n d e r T h e T i d e . . . .............................................................................................................................. ............................................................................................................................... S . L . O . W . L . Y D R . . . . . O W N I . . . . N G

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Date: 3/22/2009 12:50:00 PM
wow, what talent! your expressions in poetry are works of art, I at least, have never seen before! very emotional and cool!!! Jim
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Date: 3/20/2009 10:39:00 PM
This poem is truly an original. Great job!! Sincerely, Alyssa.
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Date: 3/20/2009 6:57:00 AM
wow... that sure was interesting... love the format and the way all the words flowed into this vast ocean! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/19/2009 8:28:00 PM
Very interesting shape, I rather enjoyed seeing this, as Carolyn said very original, thank you for the comment on my poem, unfortunately it is from my heart, 99% of mine are from personal experience whether mine or a friends, but hey what doesn't kill you makes you stronger, right? :) Aleera
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Date: 3/19/2009 7:52:00 PM
What an original way of presenting your thoughts, Catherine! You allow us to "see" the impact of the ocean on your heart. Thank you!
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