Catherine Adams Poet Shape

Layers of the Ocean

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                             .     .                                .    .                              .    .

..................................A surfaced "Happily Ever After"...........................................

      
RESENTMENT.          .            .      DENIAL     .          .        .      REGRET       .         .

.......................................Forgave, but wont forget...............................................


PRETENDING .            .           .  LOST HOPE .        .        .        .   LIES .        .        .     

.......................................Crying as my heart prys.................................................


PAIN    .        .         .       .        .    HURT     .      .          .         BURNING        .            

.......................................A lifetime of yearning........................................................

SCREAMING  .        .          .       DECIEVING     .        .          .  BLEEDING        .          

.........................................Forever dissapearing ......................................................

.            .        .      D r a g g e d    U n d e r   T h e   T i d e          .           .          .           

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James Marshall Goff March 22, 2009 at 12:50 PM wow, what talent! your expressions in poetry are works of art, I at least, have never seen before! very emotional and cool!!! Jim

Alyssa Finley March 20, 2009 at 10:39 PM This poem is truly an original. Great job!! Sincerely, Alyssa.

Arany P. March 20, 2009 at 6:57 AM wow... that sure was interesting... love the format and the way all the words flowed into this vast ocean! ~ Arany

Aleera De La Keur March 19, 2009 at 8:28 PM Very interesting shape, I rather enjoyed seeing this, as Carolyn said very original, thank you for the comment on my poem, unfortunately it is from my heart, 99% of mine are from personal experience whether mine or a friends, but hey what doesn't kill you makes you stronger, right? :) Aleera

Carolyn Devonshire March 19, 2009 at 7:52 PM What an original way of presenting your thoughts, Catherine! You allow us to "see" the impact of the ocean on your heart. Thank you!