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Layers

by Michael J Falotico

                                               layers of a heart..
                                   pealed back like fruit from a tree..
                                            deeper the sweeter..

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Wilma Neels

May 22, 2011 at 1:21 PM

Lack of a better word.. "beautiful" comes to mind Michael.. love your Senryu.. love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

May 21, 2011 at 1:22 PM

well u know this is very true.. my ex husband always said the meat closest to the bone is the sweetest kind and I see the deeper the sweeter from u today about those layers of the heart.. such a delicate piece but so poignant in nature Michael my luv... your Jersey Girl is now in wine mode..oh.. wishing u two were here with us lovebirds..oh..

Emma Buckeridge

May 21, 2011 at 9:49 AM

A beautiful piece of poetry, short, sweet and true x

Carolyn Devonshire

May 21, 2011 at 9:38 AM

How true. The deeper we reach into someone's heart, the more love we find. Beautiful senryu, Michael! Hope you enjoy a wonderful weekend. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

May 21, 2011 at 9:03 AM

Good, morning Michael J, sweet now.. you pulled a delicious way of loving a tender heart... only you Michael... can be so dear and sweet.. with an image that appeals and peal.. mine is not ready to be pealed... i want it to be just RIPE* <--- lol... but, when the right hands come... he better not slip on my bannana peals... take care... and this comment was so much fun.. ,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico

May 21, 2011 at 9:10 AM

And my sweet p.d. your comments are always fun and unique in the best way... The hands that come and hold your heart will be strong and loving Im sure, if not kick to the curb my dear.....MJF

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