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Barriers broken, Words unspoken Cant let you in My skins to thin My hands are bare Sweat covers the Fear. A layer taken, Starting to break in My thoughts are shaken I cant breath... Im sinking slowly I have to leave The door is closing Im slowly choking. Your prescence is provoking Intoxicating. Another layer taken Nothing faking. Im slipping in silence Weakened in shyness Butterflies, fluttering, Anxious, nervous Whenever your near. A layer has just again, Disappeared Your touch is tender Passionate, intense. Im breathless, blinded Have no defense. I cant deny what I feel Inside Although I hide. A layer subsidies. This is heavy, I love you So much. I scream with emotion, Each time we touch. You have pulled me out I have, let you in. I have never experienced This feeling. Vulnerable no longer, My heart secured. My love crys with Happiness No longer a layer A layer no more This was originally, meant to be a song. I wrote Inspired by a song I love Colour blind ,,by counting crows:) contest: new poets Posted 6/ 14/ 2013

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Date: 6/20/2013 3:47:00 PM
Cherie this is fabulous. Congratulation on your excellent win. Welcome to PS. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 6/21/2013 9:09:00 PM
Hi connie,,, thanks so much. Really appreciate your comment & kindness thankyou:)
Date: 6/20/2013 1:49:00 PM
Cherie, ;-) Congratulations!!! Thank you for entering one of my latest contest. please enjoy all the other winners who took their time in entering the same contest you did. you can find the list on the -Contest Winners: Member area- or you can visit my newest blog called ""from HEART to HEART ..."" stop by if you like. always & forever *LINDA
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Cherie Thomas
Date: 6/21/2013 9:07:00 PM
Hi linda thanks for that info was trying to find the list and your welcome. Really enjoyed participating in your contest. Thankyou again and will check out the members who won...thanks:)
Date: 6/15/2013 5:04:00 PM
Awhhh. John...your words are so sweet. & heartfelt!!! If only we stayed colorblind as babies do, in nature...so true your words. Thanks so much for your feedback, & so glad you enjoyed it...nice you like counting crows to...very cool:)! Enjoy your wknd my friendxx
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Date: 6/15/2013 4:58:00 PM
Lol m always happy to see & hear from you. Value your comments always:) a great friend, you are......TY
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Date: 6/14/2013 5:26:00 PM
`Colour Blind, Just Like A Precious Baby. Born Into The World An Ideal Scene; Joyful Laughter Their Babies Dreams ~ I Love The Counting Crows By The Way, Beautiful Cherie, As Also This Magnificent Painting In Heart`Ful Colours Your Own! The Emotions Are Raw And I Love Stanza Five; `Very Beautiful! A Jewel To Be Gathered In Faves Her Treasure ~ Love, John ... Ps., Thank You For Your Lovely As Kind And Wonderful Visit;`Truly *
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Date: 6/14/2013 5:17:00 PM
Wow! All those passionate words just for me lol.Seriously though,this is fantastic!I love every inch of it and heres me asking for more.Well done..hugs.
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Date: 6/14/2013 3:08:00 PM
Thanks so much for your comment vannessa, appreciate it very much:)
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Date: 6/14/2013 2:37:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem
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