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Lay Me Down Upon Petals

Lay me down upon petals, Softly caress my hair, Tell me things that make me smile, Take away every care, Lay me down upon petals, Softly kiss my lips, Look into my eyes, As your head slowly dips, Lay me down upon petals, Softly rub my thigh, All the while whispering, Those words that make me sigh, Lay me down upon petals, Softly hold my heart, Handle it with love and care, For you,myself I part.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/20/2008 8:37:00 PM
really liked this wonderful piece of fine poetry.
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Date: 8/3/2008 9:32:00 PM
speechless, great poem
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Date: 8/3/2008 11:02:00 AM
Very gentle and beautiful
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