Lay Down My Crowns

As twilight ushered in again
the last of yesterday
the glimmer of life’s candlelight
began to fade away
I gazed upon your weary face
you smiled at me and said…

“My spirit will ascend from here; 
leave body in this bed
where I once laid my burdens,
I will now lay my crowns
the hand you held all through the night -
the Lord will take it now 
I’ll plant my feet on golden streets
and sing with angels too
at the Marriage Supper of the Lamb
I’ll save a place for you.”

How I longed to keep you here 
I didn’t want you to go
because I knew that missing you
is all I’d ever know
But I’ll share you with the angels 
until at last we meet
and just like you
I’ll lay down too
my crowns at Jesus’ feet.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Valles Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 2:28 PM
What a tremendous poem. We shall in glory time, be reunited with our loves. This blessed hope is ours, and we will never let it go. Thanks for sharing your talent with us!
Rodd Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 3:57 PM
Thank you for reading, Tom. I think of my daddy .
Mcconnell Avatar
November 2, 2018 at 6:50 AM
Super spiritual gem Gayle, really enjoyed this one. Have a blessed day, Gordon
Rodd Avatar
May 27, 2022 at 3:57 PM
Thank you, Gordon
Zerbst Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 8:13 PM
Excellent! Such awe-inspired imagery.
Rodd Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 9:11 AM
Thank you Isaiah
Barry-Nishanian Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 2:40 PM
"Life's candlelight began to fade away". What a sensitive way to describe dying, the hope to see each other again. I can't tell you how in awe I am at you're sensitive way with words, no wonder you called your later poem ( corny, but I like it) I will certainly be visiting you.
Rodd Avatar
May 2, 2018 at 3:07 PM
Thank you so much dear Barbara!
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