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Lawn Flowers

violets sleeping
hibernate under brown leaves
awaken in spring

waiting for April
beneath layers of ice and snow
dandelions, too

written September 5, 2021

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Sotto Poet

Date: 9/6/2021 10:37:00 AM

Lovely Haiku, Milton. I'm delighted to see the roses blooming in the spring, as well as the dandelions, which are frequently mocked. They're quite lovely.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/6/2021 5:06:00 PM

I'm glad you feel that way, because I enjoy seeing these "wild" flowers, too.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/6/2021 8:26:00 AM

Lovely to see the flowers awaken in springtime, even the dandelions who get a bad press, I think they're very colourful. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/6/2021 10:05:00 AM

Thanks, Tom, for your thoughtful comment. They also have many uses from salads, teas, and wine!

Jan Allison

Date: 9/6/2021 4:24:00 AM

lovely haiku Milton but can the dandelions go into permanent hibernation please, they do not seem to sleep just spread their seeds in my garden and lawn lol:-( hugs Jan xx

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/6/2021 10:06:00 AM

Now, now, Jan. Pluck them and make some dandelion wine or some jelly. You'll appreciate them a little more. Thanks for your read and your thoughtful comment.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/6/2021 3:07:00 AM

Reflecting on hibernation and the beauty that sleeps the winter away. And the much maligned dandelion is also remembered....Delice

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/6/2021 10:07:00 AM

Thank you so much, Delice. Frankly, I find the yellow blooms a welcome sign of coming spring and summer. I don't mind if they're sprinkled throughout my lawn at all.