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Lavender

Beautiful, soft, lavender P E T A L S Fell from the heavens to blanket The cold hard ground The steel and concrete are Soaked, like pillows, from the rain. Like the flower girl before The procession who spreads The warmth with her fingertips, Something, someone dawned on me The truth. And slowly, my heart unthawed. It was no longer callous, No longer cold. I thank the messenger, An angel of sorts, Who injected her wisdom Into my shriveled veins. And brought back The dying hope In what I was living for. Sa aking mahal na bituin. (Filipino)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/12/2009 7:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:39:00 PM
Jonathan, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/4/2009 9:59:00 PM
congrats on a well desevered first round survival. wishing you all the best in the finals. love Leke
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Date: 2/27/2009 10:58:00 PM
Wonderful! I just simply love the imagery that you put in your poems. Thank you for introducing me to this site. I can get more insight on my poems this way. It was simply velvet. ~Shiki
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Date: 1/30/2009 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations on such a lovely featured poem! Wonderful!!!! Laura :)
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Date: 1/29/2009 10:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your lovely poetry being featured this week..God Bless you and best wishes to you in your writing.*Tyesha
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being chosen to feature this week. May you have many more excellent poems featured. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/27/2009 9:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem "Lavender" being featured. The last verse is especially exquisite!
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Date: 1/27/2009 5:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful featured write of the week! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/25/2009 1:30:00 PM
Beautiful poem! So creative with an interesting visual effect. Uplifting message. Congratulations on having it featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/25/2009 12:21:00 PM
Wow, ganda naman ito 'dre...congrats on your featured "Lavender", bravo! Ernesto
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Date: 1/25/2009 11:36:00 AM
Written with such softness. Well done, and well deserving being featured this week. ~ Carrie
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Date: 1/25/2009 11:21:00 AM
This is truly a beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing
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Date: 1/14/2009 7:49:00 PM
:)
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Date: 1/9/2009 5:05:00 PM
So very, very beautiful Jonathan. Nice job. Laurie
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Date: 1/9/2009 3:06:00 PM
Touching and inspiring, Awesome write..Tyesha
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