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Lava Lamp

Forbidden touch
Among the reddish light
Burning sensation

Chase-

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C T

February 20, 2016 at 6:20 PM

edit: (Burn Sensation)

Vladislav Raven

February 20, 2016 at 4:14 PM

Hi CT, I like your first, a Senryu, I see the vision. Your style is simple and straightforward in this write. Funny thing, never seen a Lava Lamp in my life but i am picturing it now in my mind, through your words. This is a little gem my friend. I look forward to reading more from you. Have a good day....Vlad.

Connie Marcum Wong

January 16, 2016 at 10:56 PM

A warm welcome to Poetry Soup! This is an amazing site where talented poets are wonderful at leaving comments, especially if you return them. I enjoyed your well written senryu. Aloha, Connie

Joseph May

December 28, 2015 at 10:52 PM

Very good senryu CT....

Phyllis Babcock

September 16, 2015 at 7:07 PM

A nice senryu Chase. Welcome to the soup. love phyl

Richard Lamoureux

September 11, 2015 at 12:25 PM

A belated welcome to the soup. I believe you will fit in nicely.

Richard Lamoureux

September 11, 2015 at 12:22 PM

I always wanted a lava light! I used to watch my dad's for hours.

Ralph Sergi

September 10, 2015 at 10:42 PM

Hi Chase: Thanks for the comment and I like your style of poetry. My Compliments.

Lycia Harding

August 16, 2015 at 1:30 PM

Ooooh... I like this! Cool vibe in a nutshell. Good job, CT!

Andrea Dietrich

August 16, 2015 at 10:26 AM

Chase, I hope you are having a nice day! soupmail.

Tim Smith

August 14, 2015 at 12:15 PM

What a great first offering Chase...Welcome

Jan Allison

August 14, 2015 at 5:02 AM

love the imagery here Chase:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

August 13, 2015 at 3:48 AM

Enticing senryu..Welcome to ps Chase : )

Andrea Dietrich

August 5, 2015 at 9:41 PM

this is quite descriptive, chase. I like it!

Skat A

July 27, 2015 at 12:03 PM

Chase, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

C T

August 4, 2015 at 2:30 PM

hugs