Lava

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lava tectonic plates shift underwater mountain rift lava dome fries fish A New Nature Themed Haiku Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Howmanysyllables 5/7/5 04/04/23

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/11/2023 10:10:00 AM

haha, fried fish. Fun one. Congrats

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/11/2023 2:20:00 PM

Thank you Andrea, with a 1500 degree natural cooker, done in an instant lol, cheers David

MD Johnson

Date: 4/9/2023 1:02:00 PM

Congratulations! This one made me laugh -not sure if it was meant to stir that emotion though. Anyway, I’ve tried a humorous ku before, but not as successfully as you. Oh, and the little person inset the lava picture would have been more impressive next to the fish ;-) —MDJ

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/9/2023 1:18:00 PM

Yeah it’s a bit tongue in cheek MD, but it definitely needed the photos for illustration purposes, that lava dome picture was taken off the coast of Hawaii 50 years ago, I believe it was about 70 ft high, one can only imagine the amount of fried fish lol, I have written a few of these with a little wry natural humour before, check out my (tsunami sickness) one, cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/9/2023 10:53:00 AM

- Congratulations on your creative winning haiku ... well done, David :) - hugs

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/9/2023 11:25:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise, I wasn’t sure that this one would go down as credible, so I’m absolutely delighted with Tania’s placement, cheers David

Tania Kitchin

Date: 4/9/2023 8:18:00 AM

David, a creative haiku, never thought about lava frying fish, congratulations on your winning placement!

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/9/2023 8:57:00 AM

Heya Tania, I’m sure not too many think about fish being fried by lava, leave it to me lol, but the reality is it happens on very very rare occasions, thank you so much for the placement, I’m delighted cheers David

Jenna Logan

Date: 4/4/2023 1:28:00 PM

hmmm and I love fried fish... or I used to. lol You are a fountain of magma, boiling over until your thoughts flow like lava.

Jenna Logan
Date: 4/4/2023 1:48:00 PM

I get you, David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/4/2023 1:46:00 PM

I had to change the name to lava, just spotted the title must be in the haiku for contest!

David Kavanagh
Date: 4/4/2023 1:39:00 PM

This guy is fried and smoked, all in about 2 seconds, now that’s what I call fast food, you’re right Jenna my mind simmers then explodes with great fury, and I will strike down with —, oh you get the pulp fiction idea lol, cheers David