Laundry, Spring Thinkings

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I Wrote this while at the laundromat.

Washing spinning suds Watching. Thinking on spring things Carnations in strict Formation and blue roses Poses on balconies. With BLINDING beauty All are blooming and smell of Fruity confessions With their beauty fragrant Fruity concessions they are Doing their duty making Life a lovelier WORLD

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 8:23:00 PM

Thank you for the reply Val..LINDA

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 7/20/2015 2:10:00 AM

You are WELCOMED. VB Rogers

Elai Cee

Date: 4/13/2015 6:49:00 AM

whooohooo!!Amazing!!! happy to be back here after one year. Glad that u would read mine, PYRAMID :)

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 4/13/2015 6:55:00 AM

Truth be told. Thank you for your critique Poet Destroyer. V.B Rogers

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2015 12:59:00 AM

everything has beauty if we just took the time to embrace it, enjoyed your write... love -p.d.

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 4/13/2015 7:06:00 AM

Some how my comment was paired with the wrong poet. Thank you for a truthful and solid critique. V.B Rogers

Jan Allison

Date: 4/8/2015 3:56:00 PM

love the flow of the poem and the lovely imagery - amazing where inspiration hits - i always carry a notebook and pen with me now lol:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 4/8/2015 5:53:00 PM

When I first started writing 14 months ago i would have to get up in the middle of the night when inspiration hit - now I always carry a notebook as at times i was scribbling lines on old shopping receipt lol:-) Hugs jan xx

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther
Date: 4/8/2015 5:49:00 PM

Thanks for your kind words Jan. Some inspiration strikes at inappropriate times. In the dark 2am. Etc. etc.