Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther Poet Lyric

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I Wrote this while at the laundromat.

Laundry, Spring Thinkings

Washing spinning suds
Watching. Thinking on spring things
Carnations in strict 
Formation and blue roses
Poses on balconies.

With BLINDING beauty 
All are blooming and smell of
Fruity confessions
With their beauty fragrant
Fruity concessions they are

Doing their duty making
Life a lovelier WORLD

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Poet Destroyer A April 26, 2015 at 8:23 PM Thank you for the reply Val..LINDA Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther July 20, 2015 at 2:10 AM You are WELCOMED. VB Rogers

Elai Cee April 13, 2015 at 6:49 AM whooohooo!!Amazing!!! happy to be back here after one year. Glad that u would read mine, PYRAMID :) Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther April 13, 2015 at 6:55 AM Truth be told. Thank you for your critique Poet Destroyer. V.B Rogers

Poet Destroyer A April 13, 2015 at 12:59 AM everything has beauty if we just took the time to embrace it, enjoyed your write... love -p.d. Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther April 13, 2015 at 7:06 AM Some how my comment was paired with the wrong poet. Thank you for a truthful and solid critique. V.B Rogers

Jan Allison April 8, 2015 at 3:56 PM love the flow of the poem and the lovely imagery - amazing where inspiration hits - i always carry a notebook and pen with me now lol:-) Hugs Jan xx Jan Allison April 8, 2015 at 5:53 PM When I first started writing 14 months ago i would have to get up in the middle of the night when inspiration hit - now I always carry a notebook as at times i was scribbling lines on old shopping receipt lol:-) Hugs jan xx Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther April 8, 2015 at 5:49 PM Thanks for your kind words Jan. Some inspiration strikes at inappropriate times. In the dark 2am. Etc. etc.