Launched and going places

Stepping out and being daring
Steering away from the coast taking risks
Cutting loose for great adventure



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 7:18 AM
I am always doing this; made sense in about six different facets of myself.
Gauthier Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 8:14 PM
I bet! It's never a dull moment with you, Caren.
Mcferran Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 8:16 PM
Love this poem, and Gershon's comment made me laugh... as my cart always steers itself toward aisle-lands far from my destination (like ice cream)! ;)
Gauthier Avatar
September 12, 2019 at 8:15 PM
LOL there are so many ice cream flavors, you have to do them all justice, Rhona!
Wolf Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 7:05 PM
A goofy thought came to me looking at this senryu. I can see steering through the aisles / 'aisle-lands' of opportunity in the grocery store or supermarket. LOL. Nice one, Line. ~ gw
Gauthier Avatar
September 11, 2019 at 7:27 PM
VERY original, Gershon. Love those shopping lists of opportunities!!
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