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Image result for pictures of laughing kookaburra I don't live in Austraila so we don't have Kookaburra here. 

Laughing Kookaburra

Kookaburra chuckles me to sleep in my deep, deep dreams Knowing he will sound the alarm in morning sunbeams My rat terrier awakes with a start, dreams gone, new part
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Callus Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 3:09 AM
Your Sijo is technically and poetically well written, Sara,and the Kookaburra subject matter is one that evokes positivity. ~ Have a lovelt day, my friend. // paul
Kendrick Avatar
January 18, 2024 at 3:18 AM
Thank you, Paul. Glad to know it is poetically and technically well written. Sara K
One Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 11:31 AM
I've been to Australia a few times and these guys are really noisy.. another great Sijo.. are you any closer to deciding which one will be for the contest? lol
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 12:19 PM
LOL..SO..I am more confused now than ever. I need to make a decision and just go with the flow. If it places okay if not okay. Sara K
Andresen Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 11:09 AM
- A sound I don't know ... but sounds lovely to wake up to, Sara :) - A great poem :) - hugs
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 12:18 PM
Anne-Lise, you can just type in on your search engine some like, how does a laughing kookaburra sound and listen. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara K
Blown Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 11:03 AM
...people too often give birds too little concern for their intelligence and ability to incite, and be inventive.....an owl is an innate questioner ---- hence a free existential philosopher.....stan
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 12:17 PM
Sand, I think animals are more intelligent and loving than any of us really know. Thanks for the visit and understanding. Sara K
Rodrigues Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Entertaining, sweet lady!
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 12:16 PM
Thank you, Kim. Sara K
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January 17, 2024 at 10:32 AM
Sara, you have captured that slice of life between dreams and dawn, sleeping and awakening so perfectly! A lovely dream filled with music! Nothing better. Rat terriers are so alert to everything! We have had Wheaten terriers for many years. So nice to know you are also a terrier person! Terrier people are indeed a special "breed!" Blessings!
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 12:16 PM
Yes, Sam. The rat terrier is very active, love to dig holes searching for rats or chipmunks. They actually need plenty of space to use up some of that energy. Our female rat terrier now is a sweetie (she rat terrier and chihuahua mix but looks and acts like a full bred rat terrier). Thanks for the blessings because I need all I can get. Thanks for the visit. Sara K
Cunningham Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 8:18 AM
A shame when we're having a nice dream we awake to a new day and wonder what it will bring. Tom
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 9:41 AM
Tom, when deep in a dream it is nice to sleep on a little longer for sure. Thanks for visit and nice review of my work. Sara K
Delaney Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 7:47 AM
How fun that you dreamed of a Kookaburra, Sara: Must have been from watching the video I had with my Wild birds poem. I’m not sure if they eat rat terriers but best to err on the side of caution. Hope you are well. I just had a nasty ‘flu. Hugs, SuZ
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 9:40 AM
Suzanne, oh, my rat terrier is afraid of different sounds especially unfamiliar ones is the reason that I put her in there. LOL..Sorry to learn about you having the flu. I do not desire to have it. I hope it is not one of those viruses that can come to one over the internet. LOL>.Sara K
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January 17, 2024 at 7:30 AM
I feel this way when i had a macaw kingdom in my house, when i lived in another island not the city, every morning i wake up to them screaming. I know how the rat terrier would have felt. I love how your sijos flows, you’ve nailed it! Pleasure reading always your work, sending you light always
Kendrick Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 9:39 AM
IE, thank you for the kind review and sharing some of your experiences. These are not so easy to write. I don't know if I have got the lyrical quality to it yet. Sara K
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