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Image result for pictures of laughing kookaburra I don't live in Austraila so we don't have Kookaburra here.

Kookaburra chuckles me to sleep in my deep, deep dreams Knowing he will sound the alarm in morning sunbeams My rat terrier awakes with a start, dreams gone, new part

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Paul Callus

Date: 1/18/2024 3:09:00 AM

Your Sijo is technically and poetically well written, Sara,and the Kookaburra subject matter is one that evokes positivity. ~ Have a lovelt day, my friend. // paul

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/18/2024 3:18:00 AM

Thank you, Paul. Glad to know it is poetically and technically well written. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 1/17/2024 11:31:00 AM

I've been to Australia a few times and these guys are really noisy.. another great Sijo.. are you any closer to deciding which one will be for the contest? lol

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2024 12:19:00 PM

LOL..SO..I am more confused now than ever. I need to make a decision and just go with the flow. If it places okay if not okay. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/17/2024 11:09:00 AM

- A sound I don't know ... but sounds lovely to wake up to, Sara :) - A great poem :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2024 12:18:00 PM

Anne-Lise, you can just type in on your search engine some like, how does a laughing kookaburra sound and listen. Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara K

Sand Blown

Date: 1/17/2024 11:03:00 AM

...people too often give birds too little concern for their intelligence and ability to incite, and be inventive.....an owl is an innate questioner ---- hence a free existential philosopher.....stan

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2024 12:17:00 PM

Sand, I think animals are more intelligent and loving than any of us really know. Thanks for the visit and understanding. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/17/2024 10:41:00 AM

Entertaining, sweet lady!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2024 12:16:00 PM

Thank you, Kim. Sara K

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/17/2024 10:32:00 AM

Sara, you have captured that slice of life between dreams and dawn, sleeping and awakening so perfectly! A lovely dream filled with music! Nothing better. Rat terriers are so alert to everything! We have had Wheaten terriers for many years. So nice to know you are also a terrier person! Terrier people are indeed a special "breed!" Blessings!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2024 12:16:00 PM

Yes, Sam. The rat terrier is very active, love to dig holes searching for rats or chipmunks. They actually need plenty of space to use up some of that energy. Our female rat terrier now is a sweetie (she rat terrier and chihuahua mix but looks and acts like a full bred rat terrier). Thanks for the blessings because I need all I can get. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/17/2024 8:18:00 AM

A shame when we're having a nice dream we awake to a new day and wonder what it will bring. Tom

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2024 9:41:00 AM

Tom, when deep in a dream it is nice to sleep on a little longer for sure. Thanks for visit and nice review of my work. Sara K

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 1/17/2024 7:47:00 AM

How fun that you dreamed of a Kookaburra, Sara: Must have been from watching the video I had with my Wild birds poem. I’m not sure if they eat rat terriers but best to err on the side of caution. Hope you are well. I just had a nasty ‘flu. Hugs, SuZ

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2024 9:40:00 AM

Suzanne, oh, my rat terrier is afraid of different sounds especially unfamiliar ones is the reason that I put her in there. LOL..Sorry to learn about you having the flu. I do not desire to have it. I hope it is not one of those viruses that can come to one over the internet. LOL>.Sara K

Ink Empress

Date: 1/17/2024 7:30:00 AM

I feel this way when i had a macaw kingdom in my house, when i lived in another island not the city, every morning i wake up to them screaming. I know how the rat terrier would have felt. I love how your sijos flows, you’ve nailed it! Pleasure reading always your work, sending you light always

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/17/2024 9:39:00 AM

IE, thank you for the kind review and sharing some of your experiences. These are not so easy to write. I don't know if I have got the lyrical quality to it yet. Sara K