Lationshippers Blues

Lationshippers blues relationships the ebb n flow, are they the one, its hard to know, some never let, true feelings show, the end result regret, another game n set, busted heart throb throes, like a punch in the bloody nose, better luck next time ol Mose, catchem shiela if m let.... thanks Russell Siveys :Finding reality" Don
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Onclaud Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 4:06 PM
bloody wicked and fun, don.. how are you?. :) huggs!
Kendrick Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 3:43 PM
Interesting work..Sara
Sivey Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 9:01 AM
What an awesome rendition that stemmed from mine own poem! You sure can get inspired from other peoples work, Great Work!!
Williams Avatar
May 29, 2012 at 2:29 AM
Don, very true about not letting feelings show, I like it..Dave
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