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Lathering a Coffee Day

LATHERING A COFFEE DAY . . . . . . wispy threads fall like crystal glass frothy eyes drenched with slits icy bubbles lathering soft giggles snugly bugs flirt with moist grass ~ ~ ~ boat bathing on a rippled ballet sway coat of rain perfumed nude flesh note sings the aftermath of suds roast coffee brews a pillowed day :::::::::::::::::: Rick Parise’s ‘ Lento Poetry’

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Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/27/2011 8:10:00 AM

Salamat Nette para sa iyong uri komento! I haven't been lately on Soup and still got these problems with both arms and right hand. The physiotherapy didn't help much and it's still painful. Lovely penned verses! Will post another Haiku today on Soup. Hope you're ok and have a nice week! Hugs, Gert:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/26/2011 10:22:00 AM

mmmm..smelling the brewing coffee in this piece so full of great imaginative lines Nette luv.. good luck in Rick's contest as u nailed the form so wonderfully... great rhyming words luv..

Kash Poet

Date: 7/25/2011 3:15:00 PM

Amazing poetry from you Nette.Enjoyed very much.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/24/2011 5:12:00 PM

sounds luxurious!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2011 10:55:00 AM

I sure liked that pillowed day line and rippled ballet! Best wishes in the Lento contest! Luv, andrea

Jun-Jun Villanueva

Date: 7/23/2011 8:45:00 PM

great entry nette. . . a winner ! ! smile *-*junjun

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/23/2011 7:53:00 PM

Light and lovely Nette, as usual, your words have a love affair with the mind. Love, Elizabeth

Jancarl Campi

Date: 7/23/2011 4:46:00 PM

A very interesting write. You have an unique way with words. Some of the words are a bit of a tongue twister. Thanks for sharing your words with us, and thanks for reading my work, JancarlC.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/23/2011 4:42:00 PM

Today I have posted two poems so I think you can post it or I will extend the number of my poems if needs be.nette

Jack Ross Jr.

Date: 7/23/2011 4:10:00 PM

Very nice write, love the words and methaphors