Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

Lathering a Coffee Day

LATHERING A COFFEE DAY
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wispy threads fall like crystal glass
   frothy eyes drenched  with slits 
        icy bubbles lathering soft giggles 
snugly bugs flirt with moist grass

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boat bathing on a rippled ballet sway
   coat of rain perfumed nude flesh
        note sings the aftermath of suds
roast coffee brews a pillowed day


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Rick Parise’s ‘ Lento Poetry’

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Gert W. Knop July 27, 2011 at 8:10 AM Salamat Nette para sa iyong uri komento! I haven't been lately on Soup and still got these problems with both arms and right hand. The physiotherapy didn't help much and it's still painful. Lovely penned verses! Will post another Haiku today on Soup. Hope you're ok and have a nice week! Hugs, Gert:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 26, 2011 at 10:22 AM mmmm..smelling the brewing coffee in this piece so full of great imaginative lines Nette luv.. good luck in Rick's contest as u nailed the form so wonderfully... great rhyming words luv..

Kash Poet July 25, 2011 at 3:15 PM Amazing poetry from you Nette.Enjoyed very much.

Doris Culverhouse July 24, 2011 at 5:12 PM sounds luxurious!!

Andrea Dietrich July 24, 2011 at 10:55 AM I sure liked that pillowed day line and rippled ballet! Best wishes in the Lento contest! Luv, andrea

Jun-Jun Villanueva July 23, 2011 at 8:45 PM great entry nette. . . a winner ! ! smile *-*junjun

Elizabeth Wesley July 23, 2011 at 7:53 PM Light and lovely Nette, as usual, your words have a love affair with the mind. Love, Elizabeth

Jancarl Campi July 23, 2011 at 4:46 PM A very interesting write. You have an unique way with words. Some of the words are a bit of a tongue twister. Thanks for sharing your words with us, and thanks for reading my work, JancarlC.

Dr.Ram Mehta July 23, 2011 at 4:42 PM Today I have posted two poems so I think you can post it or I will extend the number of my poems if needs be.nette

Jack Ross Jr. July 23, 2011 at 4:10 PM Very nice write, love the words and methaphors