Savanah Weinu Poet Rhyme

Late Night Thoughts

we wanted to be adults as kids.
now we are adults wishing to be kids again. 
in this life you can never win.
brought into this world with no future plan. 
im just hoping to have a good life 
and make it last. 
the sun dont shine everyday,
but a smile on ur face is supposed to make            
everything "okay". 
always been wiser then the kids my age
does that mean that i am too 
young for my pain?

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Beata Agustin December 16, 2024 at 5:03 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Shane Thacker December 14, 2024 at 5:20 PM Nicely written, Savanah. I especially liked the first three lines, as they are very powerful and set the tone for the rest of the poem. Savanah Weinu December 14, 2024 at 5:23 PM Thank you so much shane. this is my first overall poem i wrote, so i appreciate the love & im glad it resonated with you!