Late Night Heartbreak

Nightfall swallows the day
The lovely beast make their sounds
Tis the hour of nocturnal play
The weak and feeble arent allowed

But in the systematic act
There is a slight disrupt
I must watch my back
The succubus runs amok

Her eyes set on me
Looks like she wants to play
But she fails to see
My heart wont be part of her game

Her meaning was overcome by rage
Now she has nothing to live for
The late night heartbreak
Doesnt belong to me, but to her.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Nutter Avatar
October 14, 2012 at 11:18 PM
The mythical Succubus brought to life in this wonderful poem. Well done
Jefferson Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 8:05 AM
And the tables have turned on her. Thanks for the comment.
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