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Late Night Heartbreak

Nightfall swallows the day The lovely beast make their sounds Tis the hour of nocturnal play The weak and feeble arent allowed But in the systematic act There is a slight disrupt I must watch my back The succubus runs amok Her eyes set on me Looks like she wants to play But she fails to see My heart wont be part of her game Her meaning was overcome by rage Now she has nothing to live for The late night heartbreak Doesnt belong to me, but to her.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/14/2012 11:18:00 PM
The mythical Succubus brought to life in this wonderful poem. Well done
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Charles Jefferson
Date: 10/15/2012 8:05:00 AM
And the tables have turned on her. Thanks for the comment.

Book: Shattered Sighs