Late Love

Are you the Aphrodite of the Greek tales
Or the Artemis who admirers drooling sent? 
No, for Aphrodite had her little flaws
And Artemis the fortunes of Orion bent.

Nor are you the stunning star that the Magi led.
For the over-told story of the Magi is as old as dirt
But your drowsy rounded eyes look so cunning fresh; 
The kind of tools that the will men pervert.

The famous Ishtar cannot be your match
For she lured with looks in order to kill; 
And Inanna may have tried to rival you a bit
Had she not given in to Dumuzi’s antique skill.

And tired of prating about deities, I now must say I love you.
I know that time is so much gone, and so is my chance; 
The remote luck I thought I stood some years gone
Must now be as extinct as the Pyrenean Ibex of ancient France.

Nosy bird says you vowed holy nuptials yesteryear, 
Iron twines that a luck-loving man must never sever.
Yet can I ever lose you without losing all breath,too?
Do I toy with the time-oiled vice that damns forever?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Carroll Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 11:58 AM
Hi - it's strange that I should select this poem to read first as I live only 5 minutes away from the supposed birthplace of Aphrodite. I enjoyed reading it and loved the way you summed it up in the final verse.
Makama Avatar
April 4, 2015 at 6:53 AM
Absolutely wonderful! Its a blessed and wonderful weekend for me, chilling out with poetic lines so fine and touching
Hunjeri Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 2:43 AM
Wow Mr Mumo, I don't remember reading all this history in my school years. I so enjoyed the story
Devonshire Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 11:28 AM
How romantic, Hannington. You have employed your knowledge of the ancient gods and goddesses to create a gem! Love, Carolyn
Roper Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 8:47 AM
Such a beautiful romantic verse, to compare your love one to a goddess. Blessings sir a 7
Mutindi Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 8:44 AM
Well penned verses Mumo, love the flow of this beautiful story...though I'll have to take history books to familiarize myself with the goddesses!
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