This form is basically an etheree, except I've placed the one syllable word after the 5 syllable word.
steel skies blinding sun Georgia’s Winter praising arms of oaks bare hopeful for buds, for Spring will soon appear; daffodils will break the earth; proclamation all things are new, again, renewed; rain mixed with thunder and lightning; grace puddles
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