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Late February 2025

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This form is basically an etheree, except I've placed the one syllable word after the 5 syllable word.

steel skies blinding sun Georgia’s Winter praising arms of oaks bare hopeful for buds, for Spring will soon appear; daffodils will break the earth; proclamation all things are new, again, renewed; rain mixed with thunder and lightning; grace puddles

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/24/2025 8:51:00 PM

Majestic, creative paean to Spring, King. Bring it on!!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2025 4:44:00 AM

Thank you, Gershon! Though I constantly put lotion on my hands, they hurt. Can’t wait for the magic touch of Spring healing. I understand why older people move out of the cold. LOL! And I’m not even in Chicago!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/24/2025 6:00:00 AM

Lovely, creative poem, Kim. Here in north Mississippi, we've had days on end of brutal cold (lows in the teens, highs in the twenties). I'm ready for those daffodils! Janice

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/25/2025 4:44:00 AM

Me too! Hugs!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 2/23/2025 10:23:00 PM

As there is an ending there is a beginning for everything in life. Hugs and love. BEAUTIFUL WRITE. Jennifer

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2025 5:01:00 AM

Thank you, sweet Jennifer! :)

Paige Hind

Date: 2/23/2025 7:56:00 PM

Beautiful writing, love "grace puddles" and "daffodils breaking through earth" - ready for Spring, are you? :) Hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2025 5:01:00 AM

Always ready for the next season, although I hate the bugs…lol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2025 11:09:00 AM

What an interesting way to compose your sweet spring etheree

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2025 11:30:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea!

Michael Tor

Date: 2/23/2025 8:56:00 AM

Lovely Kim great transformation of climatic changes really enjoyed reading trying to catch up on commenting been away. Maria Williams did a video song on my Poem Wishing Upon A Star. If you get a chance please go to Maria's page and comment on the song video her and her husband Ron produced. Thank you Kim will catch up on the rest of your Poetry. God bless...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2025 11:30:00 AM

Thank you, Mike!