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Late Autumn

My gaze seduced; a twirling leaf With winter’s whisper in its whirl Too near the fall departs – a thief My gaze seduced; a twirling leaf Bejeweled upon a frail motif Till plundered plush by powdered pearl My gaze seduced; a twirling leaf With winter’s whisper in its whirl 18 Nov 2016

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Date: 10/25/2016 3:08:00 AM
Congrats David, for your placement with this lovely piece!! ;-)
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Date: 10/24/2016 1:42:00 PM
Dear David, beautiful...congrats on your placement in the contest..nice whispers in leaf whirls in autumn.//love, Anu:)
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Date: 10/22/2016 5:41:00 AM
I'm not usually a big fan of repetition in poetry, but you made this elegant Triolet with its seductive flair, possibly change my mind. :)
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