Late At Night

Watching me with those creepy eyes, i hear noises of a man who cries, 
you are back again to startle me, with your demonic hands you cradle me, 
ghouls from the past haunt my mind, only a night it takes to rewind, 
will this journey last a lifetime? , the aura of fear has me blind.

You were standing close to me as i slept, not yours but my heart which wept, 
i shuddered in fear as the nightmare woke me up, 
memoirs of my burnt house broke me up, 
had i not tried to escape? .....when i felt your breath on my nape.

So long since i have known you, strange i am to the familiar you, 
why is it me that you follow? ....with your eyes so hollow, 
i know not the reason why....i dare not question and cry, 
when you pulled me with such power....only the dead try. 

I called the psychic that day, with hair so gray, 
said he sees an evil ray, 
said he can't help me today, send me blessings so i live to see the sun rays, 
his exit led to more fear, wished to leave the place without a tear, 
hoped to live without you being near, 
this life...i won't share.

Before dusk you made me yours, 
you ordered me not to venture outdoors, 
i had not known my soul that night, i opened my eyes with all the might, 
your force so intense i couldn't fight, soon i lost all my sight, 
possessed i was, you killed me tonight, will never open my eyes to a day so bright, 
people look at me with so much fright, they know now what happens late at night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/1/2010 12:42:00 PM
I agree with Debbie .. very impressive and most creative write Rinki .. hope to stay in tune myself with psychic power .. .. expand my horizons.. we just did the Broad Horizons contest .. this would have been great.. and Debbie sponsored it too.. enjoyed.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii
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Date: 6/29/2010 1:16:00 PM
Thanks so much for drawing my notice to this verse!
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Date: 6/29/2010 1:15:00 PM
Absolutely impressive powerful write full of longing and fear and destiny....and i will give it a 7 and mark it a fav...but...is it a religiuos belief system? if it is put an * at the bottom of the page and indicate which system or it does not qualify for the contest new friend...Light, Light & Love
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