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"lasting Impressions"

I waited and waited but maybe the time has passed... Just one last time , a look, a smile, something to grasp... The birds fly over head so free and so tranquil... I watch them all, each flight not new but never dismal... Maybe one bird will have a note that might say a reason why... Or maybe I shall walk away and see this was a goodbye... The place I sit is absorbed in different stages of memories... From a start of coffee to long walks that formed a love story... As the trees changed and the seasons have gone... There is no escape from this distant bond... a past experience,not forgotten ....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/16/2010 11:19:00 PM
this poem has some good impression in my mind...^_^ v
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Date: 10/16/2010 11:16:00 AM
Exceptional poetry to be reading this Saturday afternoon Michael. Hope you are enjoying your weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2010 8:09:00 PM
No escape from this distant bond.. such an eloquent line to a beautiful write ..Michael.. your Jersey Girl luvs this treat tonight .. what is happening to our Yankees? I just cannot watch the Rangers make toast out of them in game one..luv..
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Date: 10/15/2010 5:32:00 PM
beautiful write! Thanks for your kind comments!!
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Date: 10/15/2010 2:31:00 PM
Dear Michael, this is genuinely moving. The snse of loss is conveyd without melodrama,, but in oservations of the surroundings. A great poem for my favorites. Some past experiences stay with us forever. Love, Carolyn
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