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Lasting Compliments

The variety of the lasting compliments you wrote to me last night became my starving salvation for a lover’s flame to ignite There’s freedom inside our castle caves with resources beyond all reasoning. My darling Nicholas, you are my beloved attached by tenderness. I relish in your excellence as you fancy my romantic flare. I believe in your devotion, you break my walls and consume me. Grab me and fly to our chateau found in the sky. For the sky is our masterpiece our soul saving wonder. Remind me of all the reasons you carried me to your fortress and loved me just right, like we did last night. Devour my sanity and enrich my mortality and crave me inside your warmth and release my passion. I cherish you, my sweet, like no one else. I savor every minute with you, my sweet, like no one else. You’re captivating ways has lifted all my days and we are nothing without each other. The variety of the lasting compliments have exceeded all my expectations from our first glance we shared started a marriage of dedication Written By: Laura Loo Date Written: April 5, 2016

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Date: 4/5/2016 3:49:00 PM
this is wonderful, Laura. Is it for write anything contest. What a great tribute to your everlasting union.
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Date: 4/5/2016 4:48:00 PM
thank you Andrea! You are always very sweet, I appreciate your kind words everyday! Not for a contest just a simple muse..:)-luloo
Date: 4/5/2016 2:51:00 PM
Your poem exudes a powerful, dedicated romance that is splendid to behold, Laura! Great write, 7 :)
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Date: 4/5/2016 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Laura :)-luloo
Date: 4/5/2016 10:33:00 AM
mesmerizing lines so well crafted, lou.. enjoyed this!..huggs
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Date: 4/5/2016 10:38:00 AM
thank you Nette :) Yo are always so sweet, thank you :)

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