Last Words

Her last words like wind in the trees whispered "never forget me"


Wrote for poetry contest - Wonderful One-Liners
Sponsored by: S. Grace
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 8:42 AM
Congrats on your most deserving win with this beautiful evocative one-liner, Hannah.
Scars Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 9:17 AM
oh so beautiful! congrats :)-luloo
Roper Avatar
January 8, 2018 at 9:16 AM
Beautifully done, Hannah, congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve ~`*
Ashley Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 8:53 PM
Hannah, a beautifully expressed heartfelt and sad Monoku. A deep and meaningful write with lovely emotional imagery. Excellent and enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest. P.S. you can edit your poetry form and list this under 'Monoku' if you choose to..:) ~Susan
Doe Avatar
December 22, 2017 at 11:09 PM
Thank you so much! Yeah I was kinda stuck on what form to put it under! I'll change it! Thank you!
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