Last Words

Her last words like wind in the trees whispered "never forget me" Wrote for poetry contest - Wonderful One-Liners Sponsored by: S. Grace

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Line Gauthier

Date: 4/20/2018 8:42:00 AM

Congrats on your most deserving win with this beautiful evocative one-liner, Hannah.

Lu Loo

Date: 1/8/2018 9:17:00 AM

oh so beautiful! congrats :)-luloo

Eve Roper

Date: 1/8/2018 9:16:00 AM

Beautifully done, Hannah, congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve ~`*

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/22/2017 8:53:00 PM

Hannah, a beautifully expressed heartfelt and sad Monoku. A deep and meaningful write with lovely emotional imagery. Excellent and enjoyed. Best wishes in the contest. P.S. you can edit your poetry form and list this under 'Monoku' if you choose to..:) ~Susan

Jane Doe
Date: 12/22/2017 11:09:00 PM

Thank you so much! Yeah I was kinda stuck on what form to put it under! I'll change it! Thank you!