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do you understand what you do to me? can you tell i would rather be free how can you not see? that your killing me with your pretty lies unforgiving eyes twisted smiles and unfair trials why cant you let me be me? why cant you leave me be? ive tried so long to be me ive tried so long to break free please let me go so i can die peacefully.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/7/2011 8:53:00 AM
dude I like this poem I can totally relate to it and I know how it feels. If you ask me it is amazing.
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Date: 10/12/2009 3:50:00 PM
nice poem sounds like my relationship that i had
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Date: 10/10/2009 1:08:00 PM
Allegorically right. Interesting way to put the idea down. Keep writing. Sara
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