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A cemetery stone, my tablet cold. An epitaph I read — the shards drool. Those pretty words! I long to finger gold. Instead reflective glass, the story’s cruel. 4/27/2020 Rithimus Divisa 3 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Gregory Barden Original Title: Wild About Books

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Date: 4/29/2020 11:10:00 PM
You make a dark theme seem like a cool song. This is well expressed and creatively mythical. I love the mystery behind every line. Excellent work friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2020 9:19:00 AM
Thank you, Funom!
Date: 4/29/2020 6:38:00 AM
Poetic masterpiece Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/29/2020 7:17:00 AM
I don’t know about that...lol, but thanks :)
Date: 4/27/2020 6:19:00 PM
Oh, the frustration is felt. ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2020 7:42:00 PM
Yes
Date: 4/27/2020 3:19:00 PM
Nice penning Kim, wise words put together well!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/27/2020 4:52:00 PM
Thank you :)

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