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Last Will

Dear Family and Friends, My life had just ended as you all know. It was hard for me to keep a living image of me when my body is dead. Forever I will remember. Life had just begun and now it’s the time to end. Life was too complicated for me to withstand. Even for the ones I didn’t mean for them to suffer. My past was a present. The present is now a nightmare. The future is now forgotten. Day and night I suffer with the same pain I feel everyday. Whoever suffered along with me I am very deeply sorry .My life was filled with gifts and precious people but now I am empty with nothing at all. I do not wish to agonize others with my pain and suffering. The greatest debt I would owe everyone is my life. I have died to keep you safe and most of all happy. Thank you everyone for everything that I shouldn’t possibly deserve. I will always watch over everyone no matter what happens.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/24/2016 3:46:00 PM
marianne lim, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/3/2016 6:39:00 PM
Great write
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Date: 6/15/2010 4:36:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Marianne. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/14/2010 6:15:00 PM
A sad thing, but strong and deep write...P.D.
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Date: 6/14/2010 5:58:00 PM
Awesome poem
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