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Last Time We Met

Last time we met
we both felt
it might be the last time we do

We tried to keep it perfect
so that, this special last memory
will forever glow

Last time we met
I kept looking at your eyes
as I believe that in last times,
the hidden emotions must rise

your last smile
and your last kiss
became the first things
I now certainly miss

Copyright © Dr. Mohammed El-Shorbagi | Year Posted 2014

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Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/19/2014 1:04:00 PM - Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Dr. Mohammed - I choose your first very well and beautiful written lyric poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Dr. Mohammed El-Shorbagi Date: 10/19/2014 2:39:00 PM Dear Anne-Lise, I'm really touched by your warm welcome & the feedbacks from PoetrySoup family. I'm happy to find you ... I'm keen to read poems from all of you ...and to know your opinion on mine too ... As these are my 1st steps in the English poetry :-) thank you ... Mohammed

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 10/18/2014 8:49:00 PM Hi Dr. Mohammed, I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! Great way to get it going with an excellent piece! Best wishes. Pandita Login to Reply Dr. Mohammed El-Shorbagi Date: 10/19/2014 5:22:00 AM I'm very thankful for your gentle words .. :-)

Jan Allison Date: 10/17/2014 5:15:00 PM oh such a sad write - brilliant lyric for a sad romantic write:-) hugs jan xxx Login to Reply Dr. Mohammed El-Shorbagi Date: 10/18/2014 5:12:00 PM WoW ... :-) I'm speechless .. :-D Thank you Jan Allison Date: 10/18/2014 5:04:00 PM Well you created an amazing poem and I will make you a favourite poet so i can see more of your works:-) hugs jan xxx Dr. Mohammed El-Shorbagi Date: 10/18/2014 4:59:00 PM I have been writing poems in Arabic; formal Arabic or ones in Egyptian common slang for years but not as a professional..Recently, for a "logistic" reason my mobile phone didn't support Arabic input ..So, I was trying not to stop posting poems ... so It might be my very 1st published trial of English poetry writing thats why your words are very valuble :) hugs mohammed Jan Allison Date: 10/18/2014 2:45:00 PM I only began my poetry journey at the beginning of February this year and truly i am having the time of my life. My advice to you is the more you read and comment on other people's work, the more feedback you will get and the more you will grow in your creativity. I look forward to reading more of your works:-) hugs Jan xxx Dr. Mohammed El-Shorbagi Date: 10/18/2014 1:57:00 PM :-) Thank you so much ... I'm happy for that positive reply on my 1st poem posted in the poetry soup esp when it comes from such a creative poet ;)