Last Time We Met

Last time we met we both felt it might be the last time we do We tried to keep it perfect so that, this special last memory will forever glow Last time we met I kept looking at your eyes as I believe that in last times, the hidden emotions must rise your last smile and your last kiss became the first things I now certainly miss

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/19/2014 1:04:00 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Dr. Mohammed - I choose your first very well and beautiful written lyric poem - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you for posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dr. Mohammed El-Shorbagi
Date: 10/19/2014 2:39:00 PM

Dear Anne-Lise, I'm really touched by your warm welcome & the feedbacks from PoetrySoup family. I'm happy to find you ... I'm keen to read poems from all of you ...and to know your opinion on mine too ... As these are my 1st steps in the English poetry :-) thank you ... Mohammed

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/18/2014 8:49:00 PM

Hi Dr. Mohammed, I extend a warm welcome to PoetrySoup! Great way to get it going with an excellent piece! Best wishes. Pandita

Dr. Mohammed El-Shorbagi
Date: 10/19/2014 5:22:00 AM

I'm very thankful for your gentle words .. :-)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/17/2014 5:15:00 PM

oh such a sad write - brilliant lyric for a sad romantic write:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr. Mohammed El-Shorbagi
Date: 10/18/2014 5:12:00 PM

WoW ... :-) I'm speechless .. :-D Thank you

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2014 5:04:00 PM

Well you created an amazing poem and I will make you a favourite poet so i can see more of your works:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr. Mohammed El-Shorbagi
Date: 10/18/2014 4:59:00 PM

I have been writing poems in Arabic; formal Arabic or ones in Egyptian common slang for years but not as a professional..Recently, for a "logistic" reason my mobile phone didn't support Arabic input ..So, I was trying not to stop posting poems ... so It might be my very 1st published trial of English poetry writing thats why your words are very valuble :) hugs mohammed

Jan Allison
Date: 10/18/2014 2:45:00 PM

I only began my poetry journey at the beginning of February this year and truly i am having the time of my life. My advice to you is the more you read and comment on other people's work, the more feedback you will get and the more you will grow in your creativity. I look forward to reading more of your works:-) hugs Jan xxx

Dr. Mohammed El-Shorbagi
Date: 10/18/2014 1:57:00 PM

:-) Thank you so much ... I'm happy for that positive reply on my 1st poem posted in the poetry soup esp when it comes from such a creative poet ;)