Last Summer Rose

last summer rose a sentinel holding vigil- crisp leaves colored leaves falling on brown grass- wood fire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 19, 2020 at 3:03 PM
Beautiful imagery my friend!
Kiser Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 8:30 AM
Thanks Caren.
Ashley Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 10:50 AM
M. L., my imagination is indulged by the vivid sensory beauty of your haiku. A stirring piece. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Kiser Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 4:04 PM
Thanks so much Susan.
Wolf Avatar
September 6, 2020 at 10:54 AM
Crisp...crinkle...A rose is a rose is a -- scattering of petals. Thanks for the visual stimulation, M.L! Smiles, Gershon
Kiser Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 4:04 PM
Lol, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Pandit Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 1:06 PM
Lovely capture of season changing...
Kiser Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 4:03 PM
Thank you Vijay.
Leffanta Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 12:32 PM
Instantly reminded of Thomas Moore's, "'tis the last rose of summer blooming all alone ...." but in Eire, the grass is still green! Well done! Aloha, Rico
Kiser Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 4:03 PM
I thought of that too, when I saw that one lone rose.
Cohen Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 11:04 AM
Beautiful how you captured the feeling with so few words.
Kiser Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 4:03 PM
Thanks so much Eric.
Andresen Avatar
September 5, 2020 at 10:54 AM
- "Last summer rose" ... is sad ... admit that summer is over ... beautifully written, M.L. :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kiser Avatar
September 7, 2020 at 4:03 PM
I looked out one day during the first autumn snowfall and there was one, sentinel rose that had still bloomed. It was inspiring to me. Thanks.
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