Last Star

LAST STAR Death knell at night, Laid out in illusory beauty — My world out of sight. Heaven’s clean and transparent. The mesmerizing snow melts red — Carry me away O Knight-Errant! But alas I’m all alone in life, Amidst the creatures of the night — The beast wielding his hunter’s knife. My eyes long to see you once more! In my repetitive dreams of shallow breath, I draw you to the warmest cling of my core. My eyes blinking, salty tears stinging — I feel you are within arm’s reach yet late. Darling, the death knell is swelling, sore ringing! Kiss my forehead, Sweetheart! Love me from afar! Oh, look with me. See what I see! As I close my eyes...there…the last star. 11/30/2018 Silent One’s The Last...Poetry Contest
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Date: 12/5/2018 9:56:00 PM
Your poem is such a deeply intense, sad beauty, Kim. Congratulations on your wonderful win. ~Susan
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/5/2018 10:08:00 PM
Thank you, my friend! Hugs...Kim
Date: 12/2/2018 9:11:00 PM
Wow, I reiterate. Wow. What an awesome, compelling poem, so worthy of its win in the contest. Searing emotion felt from the first line to the last. Excellent poesy! :) gw
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2018 9:32:00 PM
Thanks so much, Getshon! :)
Date: 12/2/2018 1:20:00 PM
Hi Kim Wow, what a heartfelt poem. Congratulations on a well deserved win! xoxo, Jennifer.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2018 9:32:00 PM
Thanks so much, Jennifer!
Date: 12/1/2018 11:10:00 PM
A wonderful well written deeply moving poem,Kim, congratulations on your win.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2018 7:36:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 12/1/2018 11:06:00 AM
- Many beautiful and deeply moving poems for this contest ... congratulations on your win, Kim :) - hugs & happy weekend // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2018 4:57:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Date: 12/1/2018 10:58:00 AM
Oh what a world that would be if we had no more stars.. Lovely take on the contest.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/1/2018 4:56:00 PM
Thank you, Silent!
Date: 11/30/2018 2:19:00 PM
WoW! It has the feeling of someone being slain in a forest glade. Perhaps she went there to meet her lover and was found by someone else. A very sad piece. Well written and well express it's a sure winner in my book. God Bless and good luck in the contest. JB
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Judy!
Date: 11/30/2018 9:36:00 AM
Beautifully written sadness my friend. Best wishes for the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 11/30/2018 8:58:00 AM
This is so lovely and filled with longing. You alway write of deep emotions that keep this reader wanting more.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2018 9:01:00 AM
Thanks so much, sweet Sherry! Hugs...Kim
Date: 11/30/2018 8:51:00 AM
Charming and poetic..close to SO's heart..well written for a win. All the best, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/30/2018 8:57:00 AM
Thanks so much, Vijay! Hugs...Kim
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