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Last Sound Heard

It was not the sound of babies crying Or anger, fear Old folks dourly discussing Nor disputes, debates Strident voices of cussing It was not the sound of children weeping Or taunts, doubts Young people rowdily ruminating Nor oppression craftiness, Ungrateful tones of murmuring It was not the sound of grown ups mourning Or dementia regrets, Middle age crisis managing Nor depression, unforgiveness Poisonous tongues of viper stings The last sound heard was the sound of death dying

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 6/17/2017 9:27:00 AM
Hello friend. Its been a while. LORD! This is just vintage you! Excellent, Awesome and a master in this covetous craft of writing. Keep on flowing the ink of your mind. A 7 for sure.
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Date: 6/15/2017 4:29:00 PM
All I can say is WOW!
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Date: 6/15/2017 3:25:00 PM
I really like this change in styles for you my friend. The poem speaks in a loud whisper, so we may hear but it does not come across boisterously. Nicely dine my friend.
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Date: 6/15/2017 12:46:00 PM
Wow Freddie. This is another very powerful poem of yours. I read it twice. It hits the reader directly with such impact. Actually, I am saving it as a fav. :)
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