Last Song

A simple note,
                                         strung with words of love.
                                               A unique purity,
                                          Spoken from the heart,
                                           A fragment of beauty.
                                   With more strings that are strung,
                                      A brand new note has begun.
                                         Rushes of new emotions,
                                    All clinging to the same devotion.
                                        Strobing notes after notes,
                                    No longer needing to stay afloat.
                                     A book with its pages all fullfilled,
                                               A spirit now rests
                                       for it no longer has to rebuild
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Breidenthal Avatar
June 19, 2014 at 8:37 PM
WONDEHFUL AND ELEGANT WRITE. Simply amazing. Thanks for being a true friend and fan of my works. Will read more from you soon! :) Pen on! -DWBness
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June 19, 2014 at 8:39 PM
Congratz for featured poem. I've had that happen a couple of times and I get all happy and cheery!
Ponce Avatar
May 18, 2014 at 7:00 PM
Ettie, you put into words they way I've always seen interrelated stories; How they formed one by one and how they all came together. There may be the final story of a book's ending chapter but the cycle begins anew just like poetry's creative infinity. :D
Christian-Bowling Avatar
May 19, 2014 at 11:48 AM
Wow thx My Friend your words mean so much :-)-Love Ettie
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May 13, 2014 at 9:33 PM
Ettie... Nice seeing your poem featured on the poetry soups home page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Christian-Bowling Avatar
May 15, 2014 at 6:56 PM
Thx yea its sweet having it featured-Love Ettie
Mehta Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 5:54 AM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Ettie
Christian-Bowling Avatar
May 13, 2014 at 7:09 PM
Thx doc-Love Ettie
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