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Last Sigh

Discernment is passed down across generations. Inside the eyes and between the partitions. Be that as it may, what's the alterity between them? How might we perceive both body and soul stem? My best half, you will consistently have my heart. The most remarkable princess on the planet. The sly fire is seething, and it's fetching you. Endlessness until this man sigh toward the paradise hue. Shifted symbols that we don't yet understand; Evaluate the holes between the sheets with an award. Scrutinize and examine each curving path; Conceptualism is a solid and wild naturopath. How diligently you adorned your beauty! You sigh as you escort your gifts fly severely. Consume your life and torment your mental despair. The Platonic anger has faded, noticeable in the air. Love sighs humdrum around, and endless urn bare. The flames have frozen your life, and you scare. The last bow in gold quiver stings hot and cold. To polish off the last sigh, Love's shade trolled. I'm excited by the idea of hearing my last voice. Will it be one you've never seen or a halcyon face? Where shall I be when I let out my last sigh? Or, oddly, will it be the errorless reason on that day? Convey one last glance at the sun and the stream. The Blue River uncoils at an underground seam. She sobs she sighs and alliterative name, "My love, my love, why do you leave me to inflame?
1st Place Contest Winner Written: August 22, 2021 This or That, Vol 6 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh
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Date: 9/8/2021 3:07:00 PM
Lasaab, this poem is outstanding! You're such a great poet. Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 9/8/2021 4:04:00 PM
Thank you very much, Edward; your generosity is unfathomable, and I appreciate you reading and placing my poem. My kindest regards
Date: 9/8/2021 11:22:00 AM
Back with BIG congrats, Lassad, on your TOP win.
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Date: 9/8/2021 9:27:00 AM
Eloquently expressed questions of life and pain, Lasaad. So happy to see this on the winners list. Wonderful to share the podium with you! Congratulations for your win. Blessings for you.
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Date: 9/8/2021 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful yet very sad story/write. Good picture. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day....................
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Date: 9/8/2021 8:18:00 AM
It's beautiful work. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/24/2021 7:55:00 PM
I was here and read your verse and forgot to leave a comment. Like Victor sad very sad verse , but very well done
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Date: 8/24/2021 8:05:00 PM
Thank you so much, Eve. I appreciate your comment and your SP email, and you know the sun is not always shining, my good friend.
Date: 8/23/2021 2:35:00 AM
Your poem may be sad, but so exquisitely written.
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Date: 8/23/2021 7:47:00 AM
Thank you very much, Victor, for your nice words and delightful comment. Blessings and best wishes
Date: 8/22/2021 11:54:00 AM
Poignant write evokes saddened sighs in your emotive creation, Lasaad. All the best.
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Date: 8/22/2021 12:16:00 PM
Thank you so much, Vijay, for your kind words and delightful comment. I hope you're having a good weekend.
Date: 8/22/2021 11:13:00 AM
A wonderful take on contest theme. Sure shot top winner. Too good!
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Date: 8/22/2021 11:22:00 AM
Thank you so much, Rama, for your nice words and delightful comment. I hope you're having a good weekend.
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