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Last Promise

I left you with one promise hanging on my tongue. So tell me my love, do the words still haunt you? I can hear your heart call my name across hell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 5/9/2011 9:42:00 AM
Pure angst beautifully expressed
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Date: 3/9/2011 3:08:00 PM
Breakups are always hard, Madison, especially when we thought we had a future with someone. There is a heart on the other side of hell calling my name too. Eloquently written! Love, Carolyn
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