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Last Night You Were Here

and you held me close singing a song just for me you come in my dreams

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/21/2009 4:44:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us J B. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/20/2009 7:11:00 AM

Sometimes the only way we can connect with loved ones is in dreams. But at least we have this opportunity. There is a sense of loneliness as well as a sense of mild fulfillment in this lovely senryu, JB. Nice work! Love, Carolyn