Last Night You Were Here

and you held me close
singing a song just for me
you come in my dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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September 21, 2009 at 4:44 AM
Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us J B. As always I wish you the best in your future writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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September 20, 2009 at 7:11 AM
Sometimes the only way we can connect with loved ones is in dreams. But at least we have this opportunity. There is a sense of loneliness as well as a sense of mild fulfillment in this lovely senryu, JB. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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